Below the roof of the

Azure sky,

Assembled, sighs of the

Rivers, lashed hard by the sun,

In a protest to block its rays and

Shed tears of resolve,

Holding each other, jumping together.


18 thoughts on “B.A.A.R.I.S.H

  1. Pingback: B.A.A.R.I.S.H | Tea Break

  2. shobig

    PS. See I am not a hardcore conservationist; not until it comes to the mention of ‘devices’. haha
    Stay blessed and keep up the good work buddy.

  3. @Asma .. thanx πŸ™‚
    @shobig .. fianlly! it arrived .. something you liked πŸ˜‰ so very thanx. πŸ™‚ and yes, there are no ‘devices’ in here .. lol
    @nadia .. thanks alot sister πŸ™‚
    @Ayesha .. thanx a lot πŸ™‚ liked your post on baarish as well.
    @utp .. so very thanx .. I’m glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  4. shobig

    Aadil yaar, that’s unfair! 😦 I have liked and appreciated many of your previous works too, if not all. I just try to be honest; and that I cannot be with everyone. πŸ˜‰

  5. @shobig .. you know what, your appreciation means A LOT to me which in turn means the acknowledgment I have for your over-all persona, and your criticism of course makes me think for better; my agreement or otherwise with that is another thing, though πŸ˜‰
    I’m happy to see your comments here. πŸ™‚

    And yes, I had a meet up with Delirium where you were discussed too πŸ™‚

  6. this is cute…very well done!
    The most interesting and the best metamorphic definition of rain I read.

    ShahG: what about Garrrurrgurgrgarr
    baadil yun garajat hay…
    Dar kuch aisa lagta hay…
    chamak dhamak k yeh bijli
    hum pay gir jaey gi…

  7. Thanx Goonga jee! πŸ™‚

    About garajjj, I wrote in a old poem like;

    The clouds laughed a malicious thunder,
    while someone shed tears of sympathy ..

    The context of the lines was when the face of the moon was forcefully covered by the evil clouds to bring a rule of gloom.

    Keep commenting! πŸ™‚

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