They say energy flows
from a zone of higher concentration
to that of low. What I’ve seen
are over-satiated giants sucking
the breath out of a dying mankind.
We are living in an age where
new realities are fast replacing
the older notions. Defying nature
in itself is a thrill. What if it costs
a generation or two of
my fellow beings?
Aadil's Writing Journey 
What I can see is a lot of resistance building in the mind of the young in Pakistan against the existing political system.
Thats very bad – the youth has to concentrate on their own futures – the future of Pakistan – How can they if they get involved in politics so much – and they have to now – there is no stability to offer them peace of mind to concentrate on their own personal development – the next generation of adults in Pakistan is a crippled on – crippled by the shortcomings of the previous generation – and that is the absolute horrible truth. Our present is destroying our future – all around and everywhere in the world.
Aadil beautiful poem and so true to bring out this existentialism in Pakistan and wherever this happens.
Nice poem!
This is a beautiful poem. The message goes beyond the borders of Pakistan, covering the entire world.
Thank you Ayesha!
Nadia .. yes it carries the concern for a wider range of suffering humanity..
Thanx for commenting!
Oops! I forgot to thank Nadeen and Kashkin for their worthy comments …
I’m thankful .. both you guys!
No probs my friend