This is Syed Aadil Omer, a wanna be optimist carrying the fantasies of a developed, progressive, prosperous and enlightened Pakistan in my eyes
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Searching the rubble
Of my ravaged heart
I found out shards
Of dreams, broken,
Scattered out of
The niches I carved
Over a toil of eternity.
The winds of reality
Snuffed the flickers
Of my youthful hopes.
Yet, I stubbornly grope
For the pieces to re-collect,
And nurture a host
Of younger hopes,
Produced with the shattering
Of a single dream.
Filed under: Hope, My Random Thoughts, My poems, Random poetry, Youth, inspiration in poetry | Tagged: Broken Dreams, heart, Hopes, Pain, Resolve
All that because of one shattered dream?! Boy, do you harbor some deep-rooted emotional…hmmm…talent
“The winds of reality
Snuffed the flickers
Of my youthful hopes.”
Hehe, nice one!
Nice thought with beautiful words. great yar.
Yes, nadia .. I harbor some deep .. rooted … emotional … stuff ..
Thanx for calling it talent! I’d gladely take that
MZ .. welcome back yara!
hmm it very much depicts what u have written in ur about me section… it gives an optimistic view of ur thinking style…
and beautification of optimism is even more wonderful job…
Ohhhh….I loved the positive vibes in this poem. This really calls for courage.
But still I’m being called a pain-monger ..
Welcome back!
— On Tue, 11/4/08, comment-reply@wordpress.com wrote:
The “stubborn groping for positivity” is what my bro Aadi is all about – right?
‘the ever encouraging attitude’ is what my sis Asma has
aww – thanks!
WC ..