Up above in ether
a star winked at
a star, and a divine
stroke completed the
loveliest of pictures.
Then it gifted it to me.
A miraculous midnight sun
shone, whenever darkness
tightened the grips.
I boasted of holding
a treasure in my chest,
but the world required
logic, and you didn’t show
to prove them wrong.
My hands complained me too
for not entwining them with
yours, and my eyes ceased
to shine, asking for the reflection
of none but you.
Appear before me,
or I’ll begin to doubt
the sincerity of divine intentions.
They will love us,
roaming the universe
up to the ether.
Filed under: My Random Thoughts, My poems, Random poetry | Tagged: divine intentions, emotions, frustrations, inner world, Love, thoughts
This is Syed Aadil Omer, a wanna be optimist carrying the fantasies of a developed, progressive, prosperous and enlightened Pakistan in my eyes







Beautiful. I love the honest expression. Great!
They will love us,
roaming the universe
up to the ether.
try using ENVY instead of LOVE
They will ENVY us,
roaming the universe
up to the ether.
Good luck with your UNSEEN!
Thanx Raheel! Seen you after a LOT of time …
Thanx Nadeen! Will think about it …
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very nice, Your unseen…… hmmmmmm
Yep, Murtaza … My unseen …
waisay aap bhi tau kam kam nazar aatay ho … hahah …